Hello, everybody! Today is a very special day – I am doing my first collaborative post ever with the very special Elysium from An Author’s Odyssey! As you um, may have guessed from the title? In case you have never checked out Elysium’s blog – um, hello, WHYAREYOUSTILLHERE????? Go check it out and follow! Her blog is all about writing and she posts writing prompts every Sunday, as well as an example short story every Tuesday. I really look forward to her prompts, and I know you will too! So check it out here and be sure to follow!
The way our collab works is Elysium and I agreed on a prompt and my dolls are each writing a short story to go along with it! The prompt we chose is “Worst Fears.” And without further ado . . . here are the stories!
“I cannot wait for the dance tomorrow!” Jess giggles excitedly.
“Me neither,” I tell her, swinging my bundle of shopping bags. Jess and I are at the mall, shopping for Spring Formal. We’re both freshmen, so this is our first one. My best friend and I both love clothes, so we’re downtown at the mall today, picking out the perfect dresses.
We head into the cooking store, where my mom is looking for new cake pans. “Ready to go?” she asks, setting down a tree-shaped pan. Jess and I nod, and we all head out to the parking garage.
As we reach our car, I can tell that something is completely wrong with the car. The windshield is cracked, and there’s glass all over the front seat.
Mom gasps. “Oh, my goodness.”
“What do we do, Mom?” I ask her.
“Well, I’ll have to call Safelite and have someone sent over to replace the windshield,” she says.
She pulls out her phone and makes the call. Jess and I set our bags down while we wait near the entrance to the parking garage.
The Safelite repairman shows up and has the windshield replaced in no time flat. We load the bags into the backseat and set off for home.
Fifteen minutes later, Jess and I head into my room to put on our dresses for my mom, who’s dying to know what they look like.
I reach into my bag and feel something sitting on top of my dress. It’s fluffy and prickly at the same time. I peer into the bag. Staring up at me is a giant orange and black tarantula.
“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” I shriek. Jess leaps off my bed, and I can hear Mom pounding up the stairs.
“What is it?” my BFF asks, looking panicked.
“Tarantula . . . in my . . . bag,” I stammer.
“WHAT?” Jess gasps. “There’s a tarantula in your bag?”
“What on earth is going on in here?” Mom asks, bursting into my room.
“Get rid of it,” I hiss. “Someone get rid of it.”
Jess explains the situation to Mom, who says, “He must have crawled into your bag while we were waiting for the auto repairman. Calm down, Lacy. We’ll just take him outside and let him go.”
Mom calmly picks up the bag and takes it downstairs, where she opens the front door and walks into the road. She places it on the ground and tips it over carefully. The tarantula crawls right out and heads off down the street.
“You know, Jess,” I say. “I think I’m going to have to return that dress.”
“I agree,” Jess replies. “I don’t think I could wear a dress a tarantula had nested in, either.”
We look at each other and burst out laughing.
“Are you ready, Chelsea?” asks Kayla, the stage manager.
“Ready as I’ll ever be,” I reply. I smooth out my tutu and paste a smile on my face.
“Nervous?” Tommi, one of the other ballerinas, asks.
“No,” I say truthfully. “I’m fine. I’ve done this millions of times.”
“Right,” she says, as the music swells and the curtain goes up.
Don’t trip, I think to myself. Falling flat on my face would not be a good start to the Christmas performance for my ballet company.
The music sweeps me up and I twirl across the stage, pointing my toes and fingers and smiling at the audience. Perfect. No mistakes . . . so far.
And then, a little while later, it happens.
Halfway through the first act, while doing a double pirouette, I trip and fall backwards. The audience gasps.
“Are you okay, Chelsea?” Tommi asks out of the corner of her mouth as she twirls by me.
I manage a small nod as I get up. I’m ruining the ballet!
Unfortunately, the accident completely throws me off and I trip several more times during the play. By an act of grace, I don’t fall over again.
When the curtains finally close, I rush off the bathroom, humiliated. What an disaster!
I race down the field, the crowd shouting my name. “An-na! An-na! An-na!”
A confident expression on my face, I pass the ball to one of my teammates. She dribbles it up the field and passes it back to me.
I near the goalie. She looks at me fearfully, not wanting to get hit in the face. I pull my leg back, preparing to kick the ball into the net.
All of a sudden, a tall girl swoops in from the right and steals the ball right from me. Before I can recover, she’s already out of reach, passing the ball back and forth to her teammates. They get the ball all the way over to the other side of the field, and the girl kicks the ball right into the net. Our goalie makes a desperate attempt to keep it out, but it fails miserably.
The girl’s team erupts in cheers, and half of the fans in the stadium get up on their feet and scream loudly.
I can’t believe it! They just won the game!
I kick the grass dejectedly, a few of my teammates coming over to tell me it wasn’t my fault. But, of course, it totally was.
No matter what they say, I can’t escape the truth. I just failed my team. We can’t go to state championships now.
“Careful there, sweetie,” I tell my little sister, Beatrice. “You don’t want to fall.”
“I’ll be caweful,” Bea lisps. She carefully climbs onto the roof of the shed, about eight feet off the ground. I follow her up.
We perch on the black roof, heated from the sun. It’s a warm July day, perfect for being outside.
Beatrice stands on the edge of the shed and flaps her arms. “Look at me, Emma! I’m a biwd!”
“Beatrice,” I warn her. “Sit down, please.”
“But I’m being a biwd, Emma!” she insists. “Watch me!”
My eyes go wide as I realize what Beatrice is about to do. “Bea, no!” I shriek, reaching out to grab her pink cardigan. My hand brushes the soft fabric an instant too late. She’s already plummeting to the ground.
“Beatrice!” I cry, sliding down the side of the roof. I race up to my little sister. “Beatrice, can you hear me?” I tap her arm.
There’s no answer. “Bea, can you hear me?”
Still no reply. I whip out my cellphone and dial 911.
*three hours later*
“It’s okay, Emma,” Mom says, wrapping me in her arms. She smells of cinnamon and lavender.
“But it’s my fault she broke her neck,” I sob.
“The doctor says Bea will be fine,” Mom tells me. “Would you like to go see her?”
I nod and stand up, smoothing out my skirt. A nurse leads me and Mom to Beatrice’s hospital room.
The nurse opens the door, and my eyes are instantly drawn to Beatrice’s pale face, a start contrast to the bright blue sheets she’s lying on.
“Hi, Emma,” Bea whispers softly, her eyelids fluttering open.
“Hi, sweetie,” I say, touching her hand lightly. “How are you feeling?”
“Bettew, now that you’we hewe,” she saying, gripping my pinky.
I smile. “I love you, Bea.”
“I love you too, Emma,” Bea replies before drifting off to a peaceful sleep.
“And our next speech will be presented by Gia Ross. Gia?”
Legs shaking, I walk up to the podium. “Um . . . thank you, Mr. Roy.”
I take the microphone from the principal. I turn to face the audience – 300 strange faces – and gulp. “Um, hello.”
Dead silence in the crowd.
“I’m Gemma Ross, and I’m an eight grader at Jordan Middle School,” I begin. “Erm . . my presentation is on water pollination.”
Snickers from the audience. Several kids elbow each other and point to me.
“Sorry,” I say with a blush. “I mean water pollution.”
“Millions of animals live in our polluted oceans,” I say, clearing my throat. “Fortunately, many people do not realize the effect littering has on these creatures.”
I look out at the audience, who give me confused looks in return.
What did I say? I think. I play back my last sentence in my mind. I start to get dizzy. Imagine them as underpants, I think.
Underpants. I suddenly imagine Captain Underpants flying across the audience. My head starts spinning.
And then everything goes dark.
I wake up a few hours later in my bed. “What happened?” I mumble to no one in particular.
“Gia?” a soft voice says. “It’s me, Mom. You blacked out. Something about underpants?”
“Three, two, one. Begin, please.”
I flip my history test over and write Elizabeth Thompson and the date at the top before looking at Question 1.
Which pharaoh unified Upper and Lower Egypt?
D) Pepi II
I circle B) Menes without hesitating. Easy-peasy.
Nefertiti was the goddess of:
I pause. Cats? No, that’s Bastet. Water?
The more I think, the more confused I get. Five minutes passes before I realize, so I decide to move on to the next question.
Egypt was known to the Ancient Egyptians as:
I know it’s not Memphis – an Egyptian city – or Nile – the famous Egyptian river – so I have it narrowed down to B and D.
Unfortunately, I don’t remember my history class ever going over the old name for Egypt, so I’m lost.
I glance up at the clock. Thirty minutes left . . . and I have thirty questions left.
I hurry through the rest of the test, only confidently knowing a few of the answers. I take an educated guess at some, but lots of them I don’t remember ever studying.
The next day, my history teacher passes back our tests. A big fat D- glares at me from the top of the page. I cringe. This is the worst grade I’ve ever gotten.
Diced tomatoes. Olives. Black beans.
I mix the ingredients into a simmering pot, humming to myself. This is going to be my best chili yet!
“Hola, Angelina,” Tía Sofía greets me. “Is my lovely sombrina making chili again?”
“You got it, Tia,” I confirm. “A new recipe, too!
“Ah, I am so proud of you,” Tía Sofía tells me. “There has never been a better chili maker in the family than my little sombrina.”
The timer on the stove dings. “Ah, Tía! Time to see if the customers like my new recipe.”
“I know they will, Angelina,” Tía tells me. “I know they will!”
I dish the chili into bowls, passing them off to my older sister, Alejandra. She swoops out of the kitchen to deliver the chili to our customers.
I start working on a batch of cookies for my little brother’s birthday fiesta tonight. Fifteen minutes in, Alejandra swoops back into the kitchen. “Angelina. What did you put in the chili?”
“Just some beans and olives and stuff,” I reply. “What’s wrong with it?”
“What spices did you use?” she demands.
I go to the cupboard and pull out a few packets of chili powder. “Just this stuff.”
Alejandra’s eyes go wide. “Angelina! This is chili powder from before you were born!”
“Uh-oh,” I say. “What do I do?”
Alejandra grimaces. “You’re just going to have to go out there and apologize to everyone I just served chili too.”
I sigh, but know she’s right. “Okay.”
Humiliated, I follow Alejandra to the front of the restaurant and apologize for the awful chili to everybody Alejandra served it to.
As soon as I say sorry to the last chili eater, I rush upstairs to our living quarters. “Tía! I ruined the chili!”
Tía Sofía chuckles. “So I heard.”
“It’s not funny,” I grumble.
Tía gives me a look. “You cannot become good at anything without making a few mistakes along the way, sombrina.”
“I know,” I say with a sigh. “Can you help me this time?”
Tía Sofía nods. “Of course, sombrina. But this time, let’s make something other than chili, alright?”
We laugh. “Sure, Tía. Something other than chili.”
“Are you excited for your new pottery class?” Grandpa asks, pulling into the community center’s parking lot.
“Yep!” I reply eagerly. “New friends, new dishes to put in the cupboards at home . . . what could be better?”
“Well, have fun,” he says. I kiss him on the cheek and race inside the community center.
After checking in at the front desk, the receptionist leads me to the room my class will be in. “Here ya go, sweetie.”
“Thanks,” I reply, opening the door.
“You must be Cara,” a tall, elegant Japanese woman greets me. “Welcome to Intro to Pottery! I’m Mrs. Wong.”
“Hello,” I say. “It’s nice to meet you.”
“You’ll be working in Group B,” Mrs. Wong informs me, leading me over to a table filled with girls my age. Perfect. New friends!
I take a seat next to one of the girls, who has a long blonde ponytail. “Hi, I’m Cara.”
“Um, hi,” the girl replies, raising an eyebrow in the direction of the girl sitting next to her. They both roll their eyes.
Okay . . . so maybe they aren’t the friendliest girls in class. Whatever.
A little while later, while we’re working with fresh clay, I try again. “Hi, I’m Cara,” I say to Â a girl across the table.
“Hey, wassup?” she replies in a bored tone, looking up for only half a second before returning to her work.
I sigh, feeling dejected. This isn’t working out.
After class, I pack up my stuff and thank Mrs. Wong, telling her I’ll see her next week. I head out of the classroom and down the hall to lobby.
I check out at the front desk and walk through the sliding glass doors. As I’m walking down the path to. the parking lot, I hear giggles in the bushes next to me. Through the tall plants, I see several blonde ponytails. The girls from class.
“Did you, like, see her? Talking to Alexa?” one of them giggles.
“What a dork,” her friend replies.
“I cannot believe she actually tried to talk to me!” a third voice exclaims.
Tears filling my eyes, I race down the pavement and out to Grandpa’s car.
“How was it, Cara?” Grandpa asks.
“Horrible!” I exclaim. “I think I’m going to drop out of class.”
“What?” he asks. “Why?”
“It’s . . . complicated. Can we go home, please?”
Grandpa pulls out of the parking lot. I take one last look at the community center, determined to never come back.
Which story did you like the best? Are you going to check out Elysium’s blog? Based on their stories, can you guess which fear each doll has? Do you like writing short stories? If so, check out An Author’s Odyssey!
10 thoughts on “Collab with Elysium!”
I love this! You did so well to make each doll have a story – nice work!
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I thought this was a great post. Morgan’s story was the best, maybe because I could relate to that type of fear. I also chuckled at the last line of Emily’s story, it was an interesting twist on a universal fear. I wasn’t expecting the LOL moment at the end when her mom said, “Something about underpants?” Good Job!
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Thank you! I’m glad you liked it!
Oh gosh! I can’t choose a favorite! I think I might share Tessa’s fear though. Yeah, Elysium’s blog is amazing! I look forward to the prompts each week and I think this was a great way to combine both of your talents!
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Thank you! I’m glad you liked her story!
Tessa: Thanks, Diamond!
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As soon as I read Safelite, instantly the “Safelite repairs, Safelite replace” goes through my head. Good post!
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Ha ha ha lol!!!!
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All of the fears were perfectly understandable, but I think I share with Tessa’s the most. It sucks to go someplace and just be rejected.
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